TAC'S

L.I: we are learning to recount an exciting event so that our reader knows what happened & how we felt.

As Friday the 28th  February came around we got ready to leave to Windsor Park in the morning. The year 7 & 8’s  got separated into different groups the bikers went into Mrs Hawke’s class and the other group went with Mrs Hoogerbrug walking to the park, when we all arrived we sat down by a flag that said St Mary's School Hastings on it. We sat there and waited for the individuals to get numbers on their arm. Afterwards, Mrs Hutchins sent the people in teams to be registered.  When we were all waiting for the individual girls to start St Mary's School were cheering me on, there was trips, thumps and pushes. Even though I wasn't the best biker in the bunch, it was very hard and some others past me. Eventually, swimming with a throat that is dry makes it hard to catch my breath. After 6 lengths of the pool I finished and was standing proudly after coming 6th place.
I like this piece of writing: Because it reminds me of my first time at TAC'S with all the different schools.
My next step is to:Explain what was happening and how the others felt.